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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-10-16 04:30:01 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | OMG this story is great, it is just a cut above the rest of them. It getsthe reader attached to the characters, in such a way that only profesional writers can do. You have a God given talent mate, use to your ability. |
| 2006-10-19 19:59:27 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | Im not emotional like.. At all but dude.. When he died I was like fuck. They shouldnt have killed him right away.. like tortured him.. I would torture the shit out of someone if they shot my dad.. |
| 2006-10-19 23:45:39 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | You, are THE gratest writer in the world. |
| 2006-10-20 22:14:49 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | After reading one of your other stories i commented that you wrote a lot like me... I was wrong... I am but a shadow of a flea on the ass of a small dog compared to you.... YOU... YOU ARE A WRITING GOD and I tip my hat to you... thank you for this story... it's nice to see that smut doesn't have to be smutty. As for cutting down the graphic sex to make a "real book" FUCK THAT.... Zane publishes erotic novels.... and they sell them at Borders and Barnes and Noble... PUBLISH THIS... MAKE SOME MONEY!!! |
| 2006-10-25 00:17:31 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | Great story! You should really go through and revise it and send it to a publisher. Maybe draw things out a little more go into a little more detail on the years. And I don't know if it was just me or my reading to fast but it seemed like you were confusing names of people in the last few chapters. It was probably me. I'll have to go back and read them. Definitely publish it though! |