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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-11-23 19:43:12 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | Madenhead? First time, breaking of the Hymen? Should have its part in the drama. ALL IN ALL , EXCELLENT. |
| 2006-11-23 21:53:20 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | Very impressive writing and a brilliant but heart rending ending. I don't hink I've ever beofre had tears in my eyes at the end of reading an erotic story (well except maybe a BDSM one!). Good descriptive sexual passages, engaging and interesting emotional storylines and well written. |
| 2006-11-25 12:23:58 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | Awesome story, but I really wasn't partial to the ending. Should have had the father kill Frank and rescue Vicky and had a sappy happily ever after story. |
| 2006-11-25 23:00:11 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | "I did not shoot soon enough. " Who's view was the last part written in? |
| 2006-11-27 08:01:29 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | vgckcgukfcuk |