| 2007-07-23 01:50:26 |
Naughty Pretty Things
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Kickass |
| 2006-09-24 22:37:52 |
Innocent Obsession
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pretty fucking sick, it was too intense man, ease up a bit on the whole death and blood thing and u might have a decent future as a writer |
| 2006-09-24 23:53:57 |
Innocent Obsession
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Mmm...Yes, it is a bit extreme. Got the sudden urge to detail a thought that crossed my mind a while back, that and a friend of mien wanted a stalker story. >_> Perhaps I'll do one that is a bit less brutal, probably get way better ratings :P |
| 2006-09-25 18:24:33 |
Innocent Obsession
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Good ability shown here, but I do think a bit too graphic. A good attempt though. |
| 2006-09-26 02:15:53 |
Innocent Obsession
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I love it. Details that would probably have made me jealous a few months ago. |