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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-10-07 02:09:07 | Mixed Metaphors | Superb story-line with the right pinch of love and romance. flawless narration with excellent writing control. plot was defined and fabulously well paced. for the reader below who critised this masterpiece, you should fell contrite as your inane babbling only goes to show how inadequate and shallow your intellect is, due to the very fact that most people regard this as a masterpiece. |
| 2007-10-10 03:22:59 | Mixed Metaphors | To Reader 10-07-07 - 02:09 Please accept my profound thanks for your kind words. While I have been attempting to bring my writing to a level that all who read it, might find something enjoyable to take them away from their existence, and allow them to find a place they might be with some characters that will take them on a fictional, somewhat sexy romp through new situations, I just cannot agree my work is anything close to a masterpiece. As I have been feeling better, of late, I am again working on my story. You seem to have a good idea of what you like, so if you can think of any ideas, you would like to pass along, feel free to write me at the personal e-mail. Thank you ever so much, again. Old Guy |
| 2006-09-28 19:56:53 | The Tenth Agency - Chp. 1 - Exposed | HOLY MOTHER OF FUCK!!!! DOES THE WORD MEEN ANITHING TO YOU WORD OF ADVICE SHORTER STORIS, LESS BACK ROUND AND DONT TELL PEOPEL THERE IS NO SEX IT KILLS THE MOUD THIS IS NOT A BEST SELLER IS A SEX-STOY! IN THAT KIND OF LANKT THERE CAN BE MOULTEBEL SEX SEEN YET YOU THER ARE NON SO TO BE HONEST IT TOOK ALL THE MOUD OUT OF READING IT BETTER LUKE NEXT TIME |
| 2006-09-29 06:44:55 | The Tenth Agency - Chp. 1 - Exposed | I Liked it, Keeping writing! |
| 2006-09-30 02:22:29 | The Tenth Agency - Chp. 1 - Exposed | I like it! The next episode promises to be good. Keep going! |