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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-11-15 00:09:27 | The Tenth Agency - Chp. 1 - Exposed | Great beginning! I liked what you wrote and how you wrote it. Comments such as the 9/28 one should be totally ignored since what he said is not germane at all. I hope you continue to write. |
| 2007-03-28 09:05:23 | The Tenth Agency - Chp. 1 - Exposed | Great story start, but I want Megan back. Make her part of the mix and make all them really love each other. Holy Toledo the sex is beautifully done in that story. Get those two out of terrible marriages, and don't make Thomas Raines and the Tenth Order filth. Glad you are getting 11-15 type readers and, of course, 9-28 is irrelevant. (Sorry 9-28 if you have to go to the dictionary - if you can read it) |
| 2007-07-28 12:13:44 | The Tenth Agency - Chp. 1 - Exposed | I enjoyed this story as much as "Rain". There seems to be a time lapse since you wrote this. I hope you haven't given up. As for 9/28, go back to your comic books. Or have your pitiful mother spell for you. |
| 2007-10-20 01:18:22 | The Tenth Agency - Chp. 1 - Exposed | A great introduction, but where is the sequel? One plea: please write 'between him and me', NOT 'between he and I' 9/10 for promise. |
| 2006-09-24 17:39:35 | Naughty Pretty Things | poor grammer.... |