| 2007-03-15 07:03:02 |
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Pal, this is not a practicing writers and authors site; this is a ponr site, so don't get all haughty and tell readers where to go if they want a 10-second jerk-off. This is the wrong place to play Mr. High-and-Mighty. Besides, your story and your writing style is very mediocre. |
| 2007-03-15 07:54:36 |
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Female, idiot. Feel free to go have your ten seconds somewhere else, nobody made you read it. |
| 2007-03-15 12:48:05 |
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Nicely done! Enjoyed the slow build up, the increasing passion, the wonderment, thegentle introduction to the joy of sex. Yes, you did warn us and lived up to your advertisment, no one has a complaint if they cna't read and heed. Well done |
| 2007-03-15 15:11:14 |
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Like any author, people write for a variety of reasons, some purely for themselves (even if they do submit to sites like this) and some for both themselves and for others to enjoy. They also appreciate feedback which enables them to go on and do better things.
In all honesty, this story is not for me.. BUT that is not to say it isn't well written... IT IS and to that end deserves a decent mark out of 10.. in my case a 9
Don't be disappointed you didn't hit the mark with me Saucy, no writer is ever going to please all of the people all of the time but you show enough talent to tell me you will please plenty |
| 2007-03-15 15:12:11 |
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THIS IS XNXX PORN!!!...NOT SOME FUCKING ROMANCE SITE!!!....GET THIS BULLSHIT OUTTA HERE YOU DUMB BITCH!!!...TWO THUMBS DOWN YOU STUPID COCKSUCKER!!!... |