| 2007-03-17 18:31:25 |
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10/10 great story |
| 2007-03-18 03:28:19 |
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I'm not gonna lie, the beginning seemed to drag a little too much but i suppose it was to set the mood. I was satisfied. 9/10 |
| 2007-03-18 23:50:55 |
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Well. The story started out slow.....excruciatingly slow and painful. But aside from the slow.....good story.....romancy....not really my thing, but i read on even after reading your note.....I have no complaints about the story....high rating...9/10......keep writing.....ignore other fuckers who say mean things.......yeah, enjoyed it....keep writing.....good luck. |
| 2007-03-19 02:36:16 |
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Well written, but so long that it took much of the steam heat out of the story. The girl appeared to know a great deal more than most virgins and it is difficult to believ that she was taught many of the words she used such as fuck, cum, etc. |
| 2007-03-19 15:00:57 |
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You show undesirable conceit as a writer, but you do tell a good story, & do it well. I enjoyed it from start to finish. Erotica rules! |