| 2007-03-17 14:28:00 |
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You racist biotch talkin bout who you hate and what if they are it wouldn't matter dumb ass its a story for everyone to enjoy you must not live in the city cause shit I see african americans all the time and it doesn't bother me |
| 2007-03-17 15:25:03 |
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I liked it. Although, I have to say, it's not quite right here. It's too good for a site like this. As you have seen, people can't appreciate a good erotic story, and are simply looking for, as you put it, a "ten second jerk". You're too good a writer to debase yourself among these fools. |
| 2007-03-17 17:20:38 |
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Excellent work, Very sensous. Very tender. You paint word pictures. I was touched by it. X aka Mike |
| 2007-03-17 18:07:41 |
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excellent work |
| 2007-03-17 18:20:10 |
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I was pleasantly surprised. This story was well written and it makes me wonder if there are some strange religious groups around. I heard a different story similar to this one for a different cult. Anyway considering the topic, it was very tastefully written and don't get up tight with some of the stupid comments below. Good Job. 9/10 |