| 2007-03-15 15:14:46 |
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excuse me, if you can`t appreciate a good story it means you are mediocre. |
| 2007-03-15 16:02:18 |
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Male, female, whatever. This story isn't very well crafted. |
| 2007-03-15 16:16:10 |
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hmm, although i did read the introduction i read it anyway. this story wasn't for me. however i do think you have potential as a writer. i just don't think this is the kind of place that can appreciate a story of this nature.
and p.s.
Saucy, you did decide to post the story, so don't get offended by people critisizing it. |
| 2007-03-15 16:29:29 |
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I thought it was well written and I enjoyed it. Marks of 9 out of 10 from me. |
| 2007-03-15 18:25:56 |
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i enjoyed this story well done |