| 2007-03-15 19:36:40 |
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it was alright |
| 2007-03-15 22:12:57 |
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good story but should not be here |
| 2007-03-16 00:36:41 |
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Thank you everyone whose comments were constructive. I think perhaps my work belongs in novels, except I am too lazy to ever finish those... I do appreciate criticism if it is useful to me rather than just nastiness. Thank you. |
| 2007-03-16 01:54:35 |
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Great story, really enjoyed it. |
| 2007-03-16 02:42:42 |
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Fucking brilliant story! That was very well written. Such passion in this story. thank you very much |