| 2007-04-17 01:59:03 |
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What the hell does "Though yet another minds thought her teacher begins to...." mean? Please read it over before submitting, and get the English right. Good story but very hard to read! |
| 2007-04-17 06:36:47 |
Exposers of the Mind - Chpt. 1
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Your comments are well taken. One would think when you paste a story with paragraphs the paragraphs would stay put. But not in this place. I'll pay closer attention in the future. |
| 2007-04-17 21:08:36 |
Exposers of the Mind - Chpt. 1
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hey tard get your shit straight. she has telekinesis not telepathy.....even if its porn make sure you know what you are talking about |
| 2007-04-17 21:20:09 |
Exposers of the Mind - Chpt. 1
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Its one thing to comment, it's another to slam someone. I maybe the asshole that wrote it but I'm not the pervert who got off reading it. Lets not throw stones at glass houses. If we were perfect writers we wouldn't waste time here and if you were as intelligent as you think you as well wouldn't be hanging out at porn sites. |
| 2007-04-19 21:07:34 |
Exposers of the Mind - Chpt. 1
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intellegence has nothing to do with wether or not you like porn. |