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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-07-05 06:54:07 | Daddy, Please!! | You need to put your story through a spell checker!!! |
| 2007-07-05 07:41:10 | Daddy, Please!! | FUCK SWEETHART KEEP THEM COMING. I NEED TO BLOW AGAIN 7/10 |
| 2007-07-05 11:16:08 | Daddy, Please!! | mmmm i lov it daddy has big cock too mmmmmil_pam |
| 2007-07-05 11:20:50 | Daddy, Please!! | not bad but u need to get all ur thoughts straight and write it like a real story |
| 2007-07-05 12:42:51 | Daddy, Please!! | not bad for the first one you need mroe details and watch your spelling. as you use more details the story will get longer and that is good. so try it again and its a great start. take your time writing. |