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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-07-05 13:00:40 | Daddy, Please!! | OK, at 17 years of age, what grade would you be in? If it's high school, then perhaps a re-write of the story, complete with proper grammar and spelling would help it along. And why doesn't this great looking, muscluarly built dear old dad have a permanent mate by now? There's something about a fictional story that I dislike....oh, I know what it is, it's bullshit. |
| 2007-07-05 13:05:34 | Daddy, Please!! | that was pretty good.you has a few spelling erorr but other then that i give you a 7/10...can't wait for part two.. |
| 2007-07-05 13:21:42 | Daddy, Please!! | i liked it |
| 2007-07-05 13:49:39 | Daddy, Please!! | Very good; made me excited. I like. Write more. |
| 2007-07-05 13:51:37 | Daddy, Please!! | great concept again-spelling-gra... would help very much. pleez write more though. 7/10 thanx |