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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-07-06 13:27:39 | Daddy, Please!! | good story, hopefully it will get hotter, but please the spelling!!!!!!!!!! thanks. lol. |
| 2007-07-06 13:45:34 | Daddy, Please!! | Well i think it is a great story. Keep up the good work so we can read more. |
| 2007-07-06 15:51:30 | Daddy, Please!! | Have to assume that you are about 11-12 years old. If you are 19 as stated, then you are a middle-school dropout. The content is OK but moves too fast due to your lack of experience in playing with your dad's cock. I usually like little girl and dad stories--This is not a good story. If you write again, have someone read it and then have her help you with the rewrite. By following good writing practices, you should get only favorable comments. In your next chapter, bring a girlfriend into the story for a threesome. Gave this story a 6/10. |
| 2007-07-06 17:23:15 | Daddy, Please!! | please fix ur grammer. no short words like outta, make it out of, and please proofread your work before your submit it. some of the grammer mistakes and turn a guy/girl off. plus u spelled half wrong lol |
| 2007-07-06 21:13:07 | Daddy, Please!! | i was absolutely pishing myself laughing when i seen the father had a 'booner' get the spelling sorted please. |