| 2007-07-06 07:19:41 |
Daddy, Please!!
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nice begining, take your time, proof read and run it thru a spell check, other than that its a great read.. looking forward to more!! |
| 2007-07-06 07:33:33 |
Daddy, Please!!
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One of the worst written stories that I have had the misfortune to read. Please learn to spell and punctuate properly before attempting to write anything other than your name. |
| 2007-07-06 09:57:17 |
Daddy, Please!!
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are you a pre-school dropout? You have the worst grammar and writing skills I have ever seen. |
| 2007-07-06 12:12:44 |
Daddy, Please!!
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stop complaining about the spelling in porn people, you want godd spelling? read a dictionary or text book |
| 2007-07-06 12:19:21 |
Daddy, Please!!
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lol sorry, *good |