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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-07-05 23:53:32 | Daddy, Please!! | SPELL CHECK? ever hear of it? suggest you may want someone to proofread for ya i like the story line good content just need to have it polished a lil bit |
| 2007-07-06 01:01:56 | Daddy, Please!! | great story but spelling is terrible |
| 2007-07-06 01:18:44 | Daddy, Please!! | spelling for god sakes. i cant read past the 3rd line and use puncuation |
| 2007-07-06 02:00:36 | Daddy, Please!! | very good but check spelling next time |
| 2007-07-06 05:53:00 | Daddy, Please!! | spelling cracked me up |