| 2007-09-04 18:04:23 |
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absolutely fantastic, such great detail, thank you |
| 2007-09-04 18:24:50 |
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Finally! A story with some depth!!! Thank you so much. I'm a woman, and it helps when there's an actual plot line to the story. : ) Write more. A lot more. 10/10! |
| 2007-09-05 01:42:01 |
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Three cheers for a well-written and erotic story, though a bit short shen the real action commenced.Gave it a 9/10 instead of a 10/10 because it is hard for me to grasp the concept of a father having sex with his pre-teen daughter. |
| 2007-09-05 04:55:02 |
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Still think that the father is going from playing with her pussy to fucking her too soon. There should be foreplay both ways with the daughter playing with her father's cock. I didn't count, but he had his fingers in her pants and then in her pussy many times. She should have been massaging and perhaps sucking his dick before fucking her. The father probably would have licked her pussy also before fucking her. The author needs to put more thought into what steps a father would take before fucking a daughter. The content would be very good with some of the above. I did fully enjoy reading the story, but???????? Gave it a 7/10. |
| 2007-09-06 09:42:13 |
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Not a bad effort. I am really not a big incest fan, but this was a good and solid story. 8/10 |