| 2007-09-13 14:48:10 |
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Damn, I shot my cum all over my desk while reading this. I would love to fuck my 13yo daughter. I see her naked occasionally but I have never tried anything with her though I would love to. |
| 2007-09-13 18:44:35 |
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you people are pathetic. |
| 2007-09-13 20:36:22 |
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Wonderfully written and enjoyablekeep up the good work and don't pay attention to the "nay sayers" |
| 2007-09-14 16:12:26 |
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Great story of little girl sex. Well written and believable. I write the same type of stories here...my style is a bit more coarse and heavy handed sexually but stil they are stories of little girl sex with fathers and friends of mother. Hot! Keep writing. I love your work. |
| 2007-09-14 18:42:34 |
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I am SICK of people who read the entire story and probably get off on it coming back and saying how wrong it is. Leave your guilt over enjoying these types of stories to yourself. I enjoyed the story. Even though I felt that the 2 year "courtship" was a little drawn out too, I think it did make the story thicker and believable. The only thing that threw me off was the ending where they went on to live as husband and wife. Its not unbelievable; just out of place and weak. It would have been better to elaborate or leave out that type of ending at all. Good job overall! |