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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-07-31 03:14:51 | Cheerleader Virgin Fucks | Usually I would say that the grammer doesnt really bother me, I read stories to cum; I dont read them to correct people's english skills. But this story ws totally unsexy. I mean, you got a great memory for the story but you used too many "Then" and too many "Now" . I would rather not rate this and bring it down any lower then what it is now. Keep up the good work with the imagination though |
| 2004-07-31 12:10:37 | Cheerleader Virgin Fucks | that story was bad cause the girl showed no sign or remorse or feelings when she was told to do that type of shit. She should have been nervous for her first time, not just do as she was told! It sucked cause there was no emotion behind her |
| 2004-08-01 00:43:36 | Cheerleader Virgin Fucks | That story sucked. Please dont write anymore |
| 2004-08-01 01:22:41 | Cheerleader Virgin Fucks | I've read better. I love a sex story with a black man in it, but the part about the dog could've been left out. That's actually pretty gross. I encourage you to keep writing, though. More imagination, less animals, better grammar, and you'll be fine. Good luck. |
| 2004-08-01 12:04:21 | Cheerleader Virgin Fucks | The begining of the story was too unreal. Precilla should have at least asked questions to what was going on. It seemed more like a rape, than an exciting 1st fuck. And to want to fuck a dog, that was really nasty. |