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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-09-25 09:37:52 | Episode I: Of the Adventures of John and Holly | Excellent work! The para's get a little long sometimes and very occasionally you get into the " he said, she said" routine , but otherwise very well written. ( I should have some idea , my home library must have several hundred novels of all genres , all read at least once.) Please keep writing this story to the original map. 10 out of 10. |
| 2004-09-25 16:49:48 | Episode I: Of the Adventures of John and Holly | what do you mean to the original map? I had a roadmap that i wrote 1-50, but after part 10 i changed it completely, and now it has 100, but i havent been following it for the past 5, so i have ideas of some but probably won't follow the order and numbering right.... |
| 2004-09-26 21:51:13 | Episode I: Of the Adventures of John and Holly | hey, this is one of the best stories i have ever read, sex or not. for all you losers complaining, id like to see you write something like this. Keep writing, please. |
| 2004-09-27 05:43:52 | Episode I: Of the Adventures of John and Holly | im not voting - i got bored after VII so doesnt seem fair. very good material but i think its too much "he says" "she says", the way it's written, to me, it could be about a tea party as much as a threesome or a girl losing her virginity! (and what happened there, they gave up, then all of a sudden they are at it like rabbits, when did she start liking it? and why did it get her off in the shower if itd hurt so much?) |
| 2004-09-27 09:02:34 | Episode I: Of the Adventures of John and Holly | GOD ENOUGH BUT WAY TOO LONG.... COULD HAVE BEEN CONDENSED WITH WAY MORE SUBSTANCE.... |