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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-09-27 15:48:07 | Episode I: Of the Adventures of John and Holly | Okay, so you guys think it's too long?? well i was trying to get away from what the majority of the stories on this site do, and that's to just do it, without any character development or dialogue. I may not write dialogue that great, but its better than the majority of stories that have little to no speaking. I figured you could at least somewhat develop these characters through the length and amount of conversing involved. And to 'purity' im not sure what your referring to with the hurting rabbits comment, please clarify that. If anyone cares i have started to get into depth in writing my next project, which is legitimate, hopefully i can do it justice. Maybe i can get it published ....i can hope... maybe in some spare time i will continue this series, if i do I'll let ya know m doing it |
| 2004-09-27 20:52:46 | Episode I: Of the Adventures of John and Holly | yo great writeing im a poet so i know how hard it is that was amasing good story to keep with the action way to blend the 2 good fucking job |
| 2004-09-28 16:16:06 | Episode I: Of the Adventures of John and Holly | the best story ive read i think you need too just tweak the writing up and make it a little smaller. read the whole thing it took me 3 days to read but its good the ending needs to be better but keep writing dont stop |
| 2004-09-29 16:19:25 | Episode I: Of the Adventures of John and Holly | what do you mean the ending needs to be better. That isn't the ending. After this it goes into Episode II, if i write it. |
| 2004-09-29 21:58:01 | Episode I: Of the Adventures of John and Holly | Fan fucking tastic |