| 2004-10-10 23:03:24 |
Episode I: Of the Adventures of John and Holly
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Well Professor, your grammar sucks. |
| 2004-10-11 00:55:03 |
Episode I: Of the Adventures of John and Holly
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I was about to say the same thing... |
| 2004-10-11 12:44:54 |
Episode I: Of the Adventures of John and Holly
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Definitely a good story. Keep 'em coming. Need to work on grammar and spelling. Separate paragraphs for different people speaking too. Otherwise a great story |
| 2004-10-13 10:41:47 |
Episode I: Of the Adventures of John and Holly
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well, your grammar sucks, but it was a fucking good storie :D |
| 2004-10-13 14:03:11 |
Episode I: Of the Adventures of John and Holly
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does those movies exsist? |