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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-10-14 12:25:19 | Episode I: Of the Adventures of John and Holly | If those movies do exist its pure coincidence, so i would assume they don't. As to the comment of my grammar sucks, what part of my grammar are you looking at. I know that some of the earlier stories do have some errors that i missed because i never even revised them. I started revising each one when i got to about 16 or 17. So it should be greatly improved in the final stories. As to the complainst about quotations and how they should start new paragraphs, that isn't a solid rule, just like you can't start a sentence with a conjunction. And i hate how broken up it gets when you seperate all the quotations. And to those who point out that some of my sentences are just dependent clauses, i know, i use them as desriptive phrases, and making them seperate indicates that some time is passi |
| 2004-10-14 23:59:10 | Episode I: Of the Adventures of John and Holly | hard to read it all if your tiered…………… |
| 2004-10-15 03:50:49 | Episode I: Of the Adventures of John and Holly | according to my calculations this episode would constitute over 200 pages in paperback form, do you read a whole 200 page book in one sitting when you are tiered? |
| 2004-10-18 17:25:03 | Episode I: Of the Adventures of John and Holly | I put up Part 22, it should be uploaded soon, and for those that don't know, part 21 is up |
| 2004-10-19 06:56:50 | Episode I: Of the Adventures of John and Holly | very very very good story =] |