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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-12-15 09:52:42 | Welcome back Brother | this story sucks.....and how come all the guys on all story posted here have massive ,8 10,12, 14 inchers of cocks.....i think it's all bullshit |
| 2004-12-15 16:04:49 | Welcome back Brother | Good storyline but you do need to work on your grammar. Other than that keep writting it can only make you better. |
| 2004-12-15 17:09:24 | Welcome back Brother | I thought the overall story was fairly good but the grammer killed the story. Not to mention the speedy "I lost my virginity" then they start fucking in like two seconds |
| 2004-12-16 15:48:02 | Welcome back Brother | Alright folks, I think we've covered the grammer thing enough now. As with nearly every story I've read on this site, at least half of the comments were about the grammer. Get over it. Like I've said before, if you want better grammer, go grab a book and read it. You read these stories for the story, not the wording and spelling. And thanks Lucan! Alright, now on to the story. I agree with everyone on this aspect. You really need to work on the storyline a bit, and make it at least a little more realistic, k? Anywhos, gave it a 6/10. |
| 2004-12-16 19:46:48 | Welcome back Brother | learn to sspell you prick........ (lol) :P |