sexstories.com
Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-12-20 15:45:45 | Welcome back Brother | what a shit story |
| 2005-01-02 18:36:00 | Welcome back Brother | Ok well there was little to no detail, most of the story was takin up by pointless bullshit, and yeah the grammer was crap but i got over it. You might wanna do a re-write and put more detail into the sex and fix the many typo's so you don't get shit about grammer. |
| 2005-01-06 14:02:41 | Welcome back Brother | It was a good story and all but work on your grammer.keep on on trying and you would ok.do not rush in the sex.write a anoyher one ok. |
| 2005-03-09 21:16:34 | Welcome back Brother | couldn't even read the damn story too many spelling errors i give this story a 3/10 |
| 2005-03-21 17:33:58 | Welcome back Brother | Bloody terrible! There is no thought to any of the rules of grammar. Each spoken sentence needs to be separate from the body of the story. |