| 2005-05-26 10:35:03 |
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Absolute shit. Bad spelling and grammer and another selfish bastard who won't eat a girl's pussy before he fucks her. |
| 2005-07-23 22:28:34 |
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Good Story maybe you should continue so people can know what happened to randy and eve after they had sex. just a suggestion though |
| 2005-12-29 15:00:31 |
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When you have sorted out the grammar side of things by asking others to proofread it, add some intrigue like other family members. look at the "Great Mom" and other series for ideas. |
| 2006-02-13 17:11:48 |
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Alright, listen you prick. This sucked. Retake first grade and learn to spell.I didnt understand anything you said. First of all, here are a few words in your story, Sreamed. Whats that mean? Doggysytle. What the fuck is that? Also, Try using capitle letters. |
| 2007-02-08 11:18:33 |
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you suck bitchy |