| 2006-03-16 12:48:19 |
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this story was sweet. no complaints |
| 2006-03-17 18:05:19 |
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Absolutely incredible - so upset that it is over :-) A compelling storyline, and amazing sex! You are without a doubt the best writer on this site. xxx |
| 2006-03-17 20:19:00 |
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Keepitup
thank you |
| 2006-03-19 18:10:27 |
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Bah. what could suck more than Neil dying? Sure he turned evil, but who really wanted him to die? Would've been better had something odd happened, like he was one of those few people who would quickly become immune to that thing. The whole story was good, but that last part really didn't go well. I know you wrote this a while ago, and this is how it likely would've ended, but could you possibly have an "alternate ending" where Neil actually succeeds? I know you're a busy person but this would be really great :D |
| 2006-03-21 04:32:32 |
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Your stories are great it is the best. I would have preffered it if Jake and Cindy could be the new leading cast in the stories and they became like Neil and they didn't throw the hard disk away like they did. You left nothing out and if this story could be turned into a movie or a book I think you could be making millions
Do carry on writing and best of luck. Everything was great the sex scenes never really repeated itself and that was great. |