| 2007-07-06 23:24:11 |
Daddy, Please!!
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Hard to say what i should say, almost all stories are good in one way or another and yes this was good, but yeah even i have to say the spelling was off. normally not a problem its just it was a tad trickyer to read this one than most. Other than that you did good, and i hope you continue and succeed greatly with your works. 8/10 |
| 2007-07-07 01:35:31 |
Daddy, Please!!
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Its ok as long as what you want to convey is understood. I rate this 10. Continue writing. You will be a great writer. Write more please. |
| 2007-07-07 15:11:45 |
Daddy, Please!!
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not a bad story. and for those complaining about grammar and spelling check your own. lol, give the person some credit maybe english is a second language, you know nothing about them... |
| 2007-07-07 17:34:35 |
Daddy, Please!!
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mmmmm luved your story made me horny reading it luv to chat to you sometimne |
| 2007-07-08 03:16:24 |
Daddy, Please!!
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Good story, but please, fix your spelling and grammar. Go for chapter two! |