| 2006-04-02 21:02:51 |
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my compliments to the chef.
and i'm not sure a movie could really capture the greatness of this, porn movies are a mockery; this is actually a really good story, probably the best on this site. best of luck to you jmt. |
| 2006-04-04 23:42:01 |
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i'm mad u ended it but good endin though |
| 2006-04-10 05:05:30 |
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FUCK DUDE . . . . UR STORIES are a WORK OF ART . . . every minor detail described . . . WHOOO hooo . . . DAMN . . . U should definately give this script to a few porno Kings . . . or maybe even HOLLYWOOD . . . Coz dude this SHIT ROCKS . . !!! |
| 2006-04-11 17:54:12 |
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dam jmt your stories are the best like the last guys said they are a work of art, they are master peices every detail about them is great even the ending very nice job you should make that a book it is truely a great story.....excuse me i have to go back now and put all 10/10 for every single one =P |
| 2006-04-11 22:02:50 |
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Thank you all very much! When this idea first came to mind it took over my brain and sort of wrote its self. The characters told me the story and I just put it to words. I'm glad some one besides me liked it.
John Michael Thomas |